why I don\'t have long hair
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I will don\'t have a long hair.
That is because when I have a long hair, I\'m very hot in summer
My second reason is when we have short hair, we can easily to washy my hair.
My third reason is when we have short hair, we can easy to wear the hat.
Finally, I can easy to cut my hair.
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>> I don\'t want to have long hair.
That is because when I have a long hair, I\'m very hot in summer
>> That is because when I have long hair, I feel very hot in summer.
My second reason is when we have short hair, we can easily to washy my hair.
>> When we have short hair, we can easily wash our hair.
My third reason is when we have short hair, we can easy to wear the hat.
>> Moreover, we can easily wear hats.
Finally, I can easy to cut my hair.
>> Furthermore, it\'s easy to cut short hair.
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