Why I have a birthday party with my friends
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a birthday party with my friends.
That is because I don\'t want to have a birthday party alone.
My second reason is when we have a birthday party alone, that is very boring.
My third reason is it is easy to invite my friends.
Finally, Friends has satisfied when they have a birthday party.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Debbie
I have a birthday party with my friends.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because I don\'t want to have a birthday party alone.
>> That is because I don\'t want to celebrate my birthday alone.
My second reason is when we have a birthday party alone, that is very boring.
>> It is very boring to spend our birthdays alone.
My third reason is it is easy to invite my friends.
>> Another reason I like to have a party is it is easy to invite my friends.
Finally, Friends has satisfied when they have a birthday party.
>> They are happy when they go to a birthday party.
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