Why I like basketball
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I like a basketball. That is because keeping basketball is very fun.
My second reason is basketball technology is interesting.
Third, when we goal basketball, it is very fun.
Finally, basketball is very famous sport.
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- Teacher Debbie
>> I like basketball.
That is because keeping basketball is very fun.
>> That is because playing basketball is very fun.
My second reason is basketball technology is interesting.
>> Second, the technology used in basketball is interesting.
Third, when we goal basketball, it is very fun.
>> Third, it is very fun when we score in basketball.
Finally, basketball is very famous sport.
>> Finally, it is a very famous sport.
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