Why I like color of my skin
학생이 쓴 원문
I like the color of my skin. That is because every Korean likes this skin.
Second, every Korean has this skin.
Third, when I have another color of skin, school students will tease me.
Finally, when I have another skin, my family can\'t inquire me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! You
were able to use good expressions in your homework. Your work is
comprehensible and well-structured. Superb!
- Teacher Debbie
>> This is a good sentence
That is because every Korean likes this skin.
>> This is a good sentence
Second, every Korean has this skin.
>> Every Korean has this skin.
Third, when I have another color of skin, school students will tease me.
>> If my skin color were different, my schoolmates would tease me.
Finally, when I have another skin, my family can\'t inquire me.
>> Moreover, if it were different, my family wouldn\'t recognize me.
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