Why I like Doctor Strange 2.
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I like Doctor Strange 2.
That is because Doctor strange 2 has a lot of immersion.
My second reason is Doctor Strange 2 has a lot of CG, so I can see a lot of interesting scenes.
My third reason is Doctor Strange 2 movie has a huge screen.
Finally, Doctor Strange 2\'s ending is very interesting.
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- T. Rina
1. I like Doctor Strange 2.
>> CORRECT!
2. That is because Doctor strange 2 has a lot of immersion.
>> That is because Doctor strange 2 has a lot of immersions.
3. My second reason is Doctor Strange 2 has a lot of CG, so I can see a lot of interesting scenes.
>> My second reason is Doctor Strange 2 has a lot of computer-generated imagery, so I can see a lot of interesting scenes.
4. My third reason is Doctor Strange 2 movie has a huge screen.
>> My third reason is the movie \"Doctor Strange 2\" was shown on the big screen.
5. Finally, Doctor Strange 2\'s ending is very interesting.
>> CORRECT!
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