Why I like meeting new people.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like meeting new people.
That is because when I meet new people, I can communicate with them.
My second reason is I can make more friends because I can communicate with people
My third reason is when I make friends, I can play with them.
Finally, I can have a very fun mind.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for this.
Thank you for this.
You have made good sentences in this composition.
- T. Rina
1. I like meeting new people.
>> CORRECT!
2. That is because when I meet new people, I can communicate with them.
>> CORRECT!
3. My second reason is I can make more friends because I can communicate with people
>> CORRECT!
4. My third reason is when I make friends, I can play with them.
>> CORRECT!
5. Finally, I can have a very fun mind.
>> Finally, I can have fun.
OR: Finally, I can have a happy heart.
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