Why I like more bacon than egg bokkeumbab.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like more bacon than egg bokkeumbab.
That is because bacon has a delicious taste.
My second reason is I frequently eat egg bokkeumbab. So, I want to eat bacon more.
My third reason is not frequently eating bacon is healthy.
Finally, bacon is not expensive.
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Hi, [이름]! Your reply is the
perfect answer to the given question. Now I think I\'m hungry. I want some bacon and egg bokkeumbab.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I like bacon more than egg bokkeumbab.
That is because bacon has a delicious taste.
>> That is because bacon is more delicious than egg bokkeumbab
My second reason is I frequently eat egg bokkeumbab. So, I want to eat bacon more.
>> In addition, I frequently eat egg bokkeumbab, so I want to eat bacon more.
My third reason is not frequently eating bacon is healthy. Finally, bacon is not expensive.
>> Though bacon is not expensive, I don\'t eat it frequently which is healthy.
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