Why I like more star than moon.
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I like more stars than the moon.
My first reason is, the star\'s size is bigger than the moon.
My second reason is, the stars have a lot of kinds of sizes.
My third reason is, stars are very bright.
Finally, stars are very far from Earth.
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>> I like the stars more than the moon.
My first reason is, the star\'s size is bigger than the moon.
>> It is because they are bigger than the moon.
My second reason is, the stars have a lot of kinds of sizes.
>> They come in different sizes.
My third reason is, stars are very bright.
>> Moreover, they are very bright.
Finally, stars are very far from Earth.
>> However, stars are very far from Earth.
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