Why I like shopping.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like shopping.
That is because I am free when I am doing the shopping.
My second reason is I can buy my things.
My third reason is when shopping is done, I can eat some food in my home.
Finally, it is very easy to shopping.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! You have answered the question appropriately. I can say that you did well in terms of spelling and verb tense. Superb!
- Teacher Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because I am free when I am doing the shopping.
>> That is because I feel free when I go shopping.
My second reason is I can buy my things.
>> I can also buy the things I need.
My third reason is when shopping is done, I can eat some food in my home.
>> After shopping, I can eat some food in my home.
Finally, it is very easy to shopping.
>> Shopping is very easy.
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