Why I like stars
학생이 쓴 원문
I like star.
That is because stars are have very high temperature.
My second reason is there are so many weird stars.
My third reason is stars are so big. And I like a big thing.
Finally, there are so many kinds of stars.
강사 첨삭
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I like star.
>> I like stars.
That is because stars are have very high temperature.
>> That is because stars are hot.
My second reason is there are so many weird stars.
>> My second reason is there are so many beautiful stars.
My third reason is stars are so big. And I like a big thing.
>> My third reason is they are so big, and I like big things.
Finally, there are so many kinds of stars.
>> This is a good sentence.
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