why i like to go to school
학생이 쓴 원문
i'm so sorry to delay my homework.
anyaway
even if i have to learn so boring things and needless things ,it had better to go to school.
before everything else, we can learn a lot of useful things.
with these things ,i can living more comportable.
second,i like to go to shool because there are alot of friends play and talk together.thanks to these friends ifeel amuse and happy.
third , i can eat delicious food in school. i can eat banana milk and school lunch.
강사 첨삭
Hello! It’s okay. You did a good job in expressing yourself. Study the corrections I have made for you. Have a wonderful day and keep on learning!
even if i have to learn so boring things and needless things ,it had better to go to school.
Even though the lessons are boring and unimportant for me, it is still better to go to school.before everything else, we can learn a lot of useful things.
First of all, we can learn a lot of things that can be useful.with these things ,i can living more comportable.
With these things, I can have a comfortable life.second,i like to go to shool because there are alot of friends play and talk together.thanks to these friends ifeel amuse and happy.
Secondly, I like going to school because I can have a lot of friends that I can play with and talk to. I feel amused and happy, thanks to my friends.third , i can eat delicious food in school. i can eat banana milk and school lunch.
Lastly, I can eat delicious foods at school. I can drink banana milk and have my lunch at school.
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