Why I like to going in the birthday party.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to go to birthday party.
That is because I can eat a free cake. And cake is delicious.
My second reason is I also can see the Fireworks. And I like a fireworks.
My third reason is I can play with my friends.
Finally, I also can blow the wind to turn off the fire.
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>> I like going to birthday parties.
That is because I can eat a free cake. And cake is delicious.
>> That is because I can eat free cake, and cake is delicious.
My second reason is I also can see the Fireworks. And I like a fireworks.
>> My second reason is I can also see fireworks, and I like fireworks.
My third reason is I can play with my friends.
>> This is a good sentence.
Finally, I also can blow the wind to turn off the fire.
>> Finally, I can also blow the candles.
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