Why I like to going to school
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to going school.
That is because when we go to school, we can meet friends in there.
My second reason is the school is very funny that is because of friends.
My third reason is we can also exercise in auditorium.
Finally, making work is very funny too.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! It\'s nice to know that you like going to school. I agree that friends make going to school more fun.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I like going to school.
That is because when we go to school, we can meet friends in there.
>> That is because we can meet friends there.
OR
>> That is because when we go to school, we can meet many friends.
My second reason is the school is very funny that is because of friends.
>> Going to school is really fun because of our friends.
My third reason is we can also exercise in auditorium.
>> My third reason is we can also exercise in the auditorium.
Finally, making work is very funny too.
>> Finally, going to work is really fun, too.
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