Why I\'m not scared from mom and dad
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m not scared of my mom and dad.
That is because mom and dad always protect me every day.
My second reason is mom and dad can move our family to use transportation.
My third reason is mom and dad always feed me and let me sleep.
Finally, mom and dad are always good for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. You are one lucky boy because you have parents who love you and care for you so much. Take care of them, too.
- Teacher Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because mom and dad always protect me every day.
>> That is because they always protect me.
OR
>> That is because they protect me every day.
My second reason is mom and dad can move our family to use transportation.
>> They pick me and my brother up.
My third reason is mom and dad always feed me and let me sleep.
>> Moreover, they always feed me and let me sleep.
Finally, mom and dad are always good for me.
>> In conclusion, my mom and my dad are always good to me.
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