Why I think dancing is good exercise
학생이 쓴 원문
I think dancing is good exercise.
That is because dancing needs a lot of movements.
Second, dancing needs a lot of training.
Third, many people think dancing is good exercise.
Finally, dancing has high-calorie consumption.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. I agree that dancing is a good exercise. It has many health benefits, so I hope you like it.
- Teacher Debbie
I think dancing is good exercise.
>> I think dancing is a good exercise.
That is because dancing needs a lot of movements.
>> This is a good sentence.
Second, dancing needs a lot of training.
>> It also needs a lot of training.
Third, many people think dancing is good exercise. Finally, dancing has high-calorie consumption.
>> Many people think it is a good exercise for those who have high-calorie consumption.
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