Why I think learning English is important.
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I think learning English is important.
That is because when we don\'t learn English, we failed at the entrance exam.
My second reason is when we don\'t learn English, we can\'t do communicate with foreigners.
My third reason is when we don\'t learn English, it is impossible to learn another subject. That is because there are so many English is in at our subjects.
Finally, when we have mastered this English, we have so much money from the government.
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I think learning English is important.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because when we don\'t learn English, we failed at the entrance exam.
>> That is because when we don\'t learn English, we will fail an entrance exam.
My second reason is when we don\'t learn English, we can\'t do communicate with foreigners.
>> Moreover, we won\'t be able to communicate with foreigners.
My third reason is when we don\'t learn English, it is impossible to learn another subject.
>> When we don\'t learn English, it will be impossible to learn another subject.
That is because there are so many English is in at our subjects.
>> That is because there are so many English words in other subjects.
Finally, when we have mastered this English, we have so much money from the government.
>> When we have mastered English, we can get so much money from the government.
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