Why I want to learn English
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I want to speak fluently like a native speaker. Since in Korea, most of English education emphasizes grammar and vocabulary, I am not good at speaking English. I want to express more like a native speaker. Moreover, I want to have a professional conversation in English that I may use in a university or a company. I want to express my thoughts clearly in a natural and difficult words. I want to be good at both daily conversation and intensive conversation.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]hee! I believe you can achieve all your goals as long as you keep going! See you! -Faith-
First of all, I want to speak fluently like a native speaker.>> CORRECT
Since in Korea, most of English education emphasizes grammar and vocabulary, I am not good at speaking English.
>> Since in Korea English education emphasizes grammar and vocabulary, I am not good at speaking English.
I want to express more like a native speaker.
>> I want to express myself more like a native speaker.
Moreover, I want to have a professional conversation in English that I may use in a university or a company.
>> CORRECT
I want to express my thoughts clearly in a natural and difficult words.
>> I want to express my thoughts clearly in a natural way using rich expressions.
I want to be good at both daily conversation and intensive conversation.
>> CORRECT
OR: I want to be more articulate at both daily and intensive conversation.
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