Why I want to study in Graduate school.

I will do a research about “Effective feedback strategies on English composition” in order to drive learner’s motivation.

>>I will research about, \"Effective feedback strategies in English composition,\" to drive learners\' motivation.

I have a lot of interests on motivation.

>>I have a lot of interests in motivation.

I realized the importance of motivation while I was studying in Sweden.

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The Evaluation method was not a multiple answer question but a essay question.

>>The evaluation method was not in a multiple answer question but an essay question.

On top of that, Given assignments were all about writing.

>>On top of that, the given assignments were all about writing.

However, I was able to put my effort with a courage thanks to the teacher who I met in the Academic writing service center.

>>However, I put my effort with courage and thanks to the teacher I met in the Academic writing service center.

She encouraged me to write a sentence starting by writing simple spoken sentences and gave me a detailed feedback.

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My writing skill enhanced a lot and I was able to be free from what makes me feel stuck.

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With this experience, I deeply realized that the teacher’s feedback take a significant role especially in the English composition.

>>With this experience, I deeply realized that the teacher\'s feedback plays a significant role, especially in English composition.

In this educational situation which focuses on ‘input’, most of Korean students have a tendency to be afraid of English writing.

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This is why I want to study deeply on the wat of deriving students motivation on the writing part.

>>This is why I want to study deeply what is depriving students\' motivation on the writing part.

 Providing a professional feedback will make a btter situation that can make students motivated. 

>>Providing professional feedback will make a better situation that can make students motivated.