Why I want to visit America.

2022-06-06 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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I want to visit America. That is because America has a very wide ground. My second reason is I can eat more variety of foods in America. My third reason is America has a lot of people, so I can play with more friends. Finally, America has more fun things than Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for this composition~

Have a good day! ^^

- T. Rina

1. I want to visit America.
>> CORRECT!

2. That is because America has a very wide ground.
>> That is because America has a very wide land.

3. My second reason is I can eat more variety of foods in America.
>> CORRECT!

4. My third reason is America has a lot of people, so I can play with more friends.
>> CORRECT!

5. Finally, America has more fun things than Korea.

>> CORRECT!

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