why I will become to taller
학생이 쓴 원문
I will become to taller.
That is because when we taller, we can look higher.
My second reason is when we can look higher, we can see tall objects in the supermarket.
My third reason is were not get help from parents.
Finally, we can get proud of friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Let me share to you the secret to become taller. First, eat healthy. Second, exercise. Lastly, sleep early.
- Teacher Debbie
>> I want to become taller.
That is because when we taller, we can look higher.
>> That is because when I\'m taller, I can easily find things.
My second reason is when we can look higher, we can see tall objects in the supermarket.
>> The second reason is that when I\'m taller, I can see objects on the top shelves in supermarkets.
My third reason is were not get help from parents.
>> The third reason is that I won\'t need help from my parents.
Finally, we can get proud of friends.
>> Finally, my friends will be proud of me.
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