Why I will not study aboard.
학생이 쓴 원문
I will not study aboard.
That is because other countries are all using English.
My second reason is I can see my parents when I study aboard.
My third reason is I need my friends when I do study.
Finally, other countries are more dangerous than our country.
강사 첨삭
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- T. Rina
1. I will not study aboard.
>> I will not study abroad.
2. That is because other countries are all using English.
>> CORRECT!
3. My second reason is I can see my parents when I study aboard.
>> My second reason is I cannot see my parents when I study abroad.
OR: If I studied abroad, I wouldn\'t be able to see my parents.
4. My third reason is I need my friends when I do study.
>> My third reason is I need my friend when I study.
5. Finally, other countries are more dangerous than our country.
>> CORRECT!
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