Why important english to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Most of all, it is for my jop to sell the robot to the overseas country.
If i have ability of english, i can work effectively.
Second is for traveling.
Although english isn’t fluent, we can travel.
But i hope to have conversation with foreigner and share the culture.
From this class, power english, i hope to improve my english skill.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I am happy that you have passion to improve your English skills. Don\'t worry, I will do my best to help you enhance your skills so you could work efficiently. See you in class! :)
Always,
~Kelly^^
Why important english to you?
>> Why is English important to you?
Most of all, it is for my jop to sell the robot to the overseas country.>> Most of all, it is for my job because I sell robots overseas.
If i have ability of english, i can work effectively.
If i have ability of english, i can work effectively.
>> If my English ability is good, I can work effectively.
Second is for traveling.
Second is for traveling.
>> Correct.
OR: Another reason is for traveling.
Although english isn’t fluent, we can travel.
Although english isn’t fluent, we can travel.
>> Although we don\'t need to be fluent in English when traveling.
But i hope to have conversation with foreigner and share the culture.
But i hope to have conversation with foreigner and share the culture.
>> I hope to have a conversation with foreigners and share my culture with them.
From this class, power english, i hope to improve my english skill.
From this class, power english, i hope to improve my english skill.
>> From this class in Power English, I hope I can improve my English skills.
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