Why is a warranty important?
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The warranty for items is very important.
As soon as I buy a item, I used to be broken a lot.
So I usually buy it after checking the warranty.
Also, It is good to have a longer warranty period.
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The warranty for items is very important.
>> Correct
As soon as I buy a item, I used to be broken a lot.
>> Every time that I buy an item, I always get the broken one.
So I usually buy it after checking the warranty.
>> Correct
Also, It is good to have a longer warranty period.
>> Correct
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