Why is doing volunteer work important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Why is doing volunteer work important?
Humans are cooperative individuals. Indeed, they can’t do lots of work with themselves. So some of company or factory hire their employees. But bit of societys are necessary for volunteer at no cost because of their underfunded. And I think helping other people is important to live in society. As I said before, humans are cooperative individuals. Helping others isn’t wasting your time, it is what human have to do. If there are a man suffering from a house is on fire. , people may help him each other without any price. That’s quite natural that helping someone. If you volunteer a lot, you’ll get returned it in the future.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Harry! ^_^
Thank you for diligently writing this essay. I loved reading about it. ^^
I agree that volunteering is sometimes necessary because it\'s helpful for the community.
Thank you for diligently writing this essay. I loved reading about it. ^^
I agree that volunteering is sometimes necessary because it\'s helpful for the community.
I hope you\'re having a great day. ^^
See you again on Wednesday.
~Teacher Charry :)
See you again on Wednesday.
~Teacher Charry :)
>> CORRECT!
Indeed, they can’t do lots of work with themselves.
>> Indeed, they can’t do lots of work by themselves.
So some of company or factory hire their employees.
>> So some companies or factories hire their employees.
But bit of societys are necessary for volunteer at no cost because of their underfunded.
>> But in some parts of the society, volunteers are necessary because those sectors are underfunded.
And I think helping other people is important to live in society.
>> In addition, I think helping other people is important when living in a society.
As I said before, humans are cooperative individuals.
>> CORRECT!
Helping others isn’t wasting your time, it is what human have to do.
>> Helping others isn’t wasting your time. It is what humans have to do.
If there are a man suffering from a house is on fire. , people may help him each other without any price.
>> If there is a man with his house on fire, people may help him without anything in return.
That’s quite natural that helping someone.
>> It\'s quite natural to help someone.
If you volunteer a lot, you’ll get returned it in the future.
>> If you volunteer a lot, you’ll get the favor back in the future.
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