Why is drunk driving a grave offense?
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I think drunk driving is a grave offense for a reason as follows.
Firstly, drunk driving is intentional. Although many people think that drunk driving is just fault, it is undeniable that they have made choice to drive while they are intoxicated. Moreover, they could predict that they would commit an accident when they are intoxicated. This shows that drunk driving fully depends on the suspect’s will. Obviously, the suspects had other various options that could be chosen.
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Hey [이름] Ju!
Being drunk and getting into a car and driving is a ridiculous crime to commit. You\'re not just putting your own life at risk but everyone else lives too. Every day, about 32 people in the United States die in drunk-driving crashes, that\'s one person every 45 minutes.
- Kristine ^^
I think drunk driving is a grave offense for a reason as follows.
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
Or >> I believe drunk driving to be a serious crime for the following reasons.
Firstly, drunk driving is intentional.
>> Correst.
Although many people think that drunk driving is just fault, it is undeniable that they have made choice to drive while they are intoxicated.
>> Despite the fact they are solely to blame for drunk driving, it\'s clear that they have chosen to drive while intoxicated.
Moreover, they could predict that they would commit an accident when they are intoxicated.
>> Moreover, they may foresee that they would cause an accident when they are intoxicated.
This shows that drunk driving fully depends on the suspect’s will.
>> Correct.
Obviously, the suspects had other various options that could be chosen.
>> Obviously, the suspect had a choice of making the right decision.
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