Why is education important?
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Thesedays, education is so important that most of the people have education to get knolledge. I also think education is important because we can get lots of things and can understand something. Education is neccesary because if people have nothing in their brain, they will be stupid. education is a part of doing to be a good person and thoughtful person. Also, if we have education it make us fill very confident that I have more knowledge.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your view about education.
You\'re right. Education is very important especially these days.
It is one of our means to survive in this world.
~Teacher Gina
>> These days, education is so important that most people get education to have knowledge.
I also think education is important because we can get lots of things and can understand something.
>> CORRECT.
Education is necessary because if people have nothing in their brain, they will be stupid.
>> CORRECT.
education is a part of doing to be a good person and thoughtful person.
>> Education is a part of being a good and thoughtful person.
Also, if we have education it make us fill very confident that I have more knowledge.
>> Also, if we have education, it make us feel very confident that we have more knowledge.
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