Why is English fluency significant for me?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because English is very important in Korea. Many companies want employees with good English skills. And I really want to make many foreign friends. Then, I need to speak English very fluently. That\'s why English fluency is significant for me.
강사 첨삭
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Because English is very important in Korea.
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Many companies want employees with good English skills.
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And I really want to make many foreign friends.
>>> OR: In addition, I really want to make many foreign friends.
Then, I need to speak English very fluently.
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That\'s why English fluency is significant for me.
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