Why is English Fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have 2 reasons I want to speak English smoothly.
First, English is international language to communicate with people all over the world. When I traveled to Russia and Taiwan, I realized that English can make traveling more abundantly and cheerfully even if they are not English-speaking country.
Second, which is the main reason, I plan to study architecture in the US or European countries. I can communicate with body language during travel, but studying architecture in English-speaking world is totally a different situation. Fluent English skills are essential for studying deeply.
So I will try my best to develop my English skill!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ella. Thank you for this. Yes, to go international and expand your horizon, English is indeed essential. Like you said, it is the international language. Everything is possible. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I have 2 reasons I want to speak English smoothly.>>> OR: I have two reasons for wanting to speak English fluently.
First, English is international language to communicate with people all over the world.
First, English is international language to communicate with people all over the world.
>>> First, English is the international language to communicate with people all over the world.
When I traveled to Russia and Taiwan, I realized that English can make traveling more abundantly and cheerfully even if they are not English-speaking country.
>>> When I traveled to Russia and Taiwan, I realized that English can make traveling more abundant and cheerful even if they are not English-speaking countries.
>>> When I traveled to Russia and Taiwan, I realized that English can make traveling more abundant and cheerful even if they are not English-speaking countries.
Second, which is the main reason, I plan to study architecture in the US or European countries.
>>> correct
I can communicate with body language during travel, but studying architecture in English-speaking world is totally a different situation.
>>> correct
Fluent English skills are essential for studying deeply.
>>> correct
So I will try my best to develop my English skill!
So I will try my best to develop my English skill!
>>> correct
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