why is English fluency significant for you?

2021-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I want to work using English in the closed future. The field I want to work is a law and a movie. So i have to learn English in order to talk free. I think I can hear simple sentences but it is difficult to understand long sentences.English words have various meanings so it seems difficult. I would like to know such various meanings and I like to be a good English speaker. Help me and I appreciate that.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Sir Brad.

I want to work using English in the closed future. 
>>> I want to work using English in the near future.    
The field I want to work is a law and a movie. 
>>>  The field I want to work in is law and movie.   
So i have to learn English in order to talk free. 
>>> So I have to learn English in order to talk freely.   
I think I can hear simple sentences but it is difficult to understand long sentences.
>>> correct   
English words have various meanings so it seems difficult. 
>>> correct   
I would like to know such various meanings and I like to be a good English speaker. 
>>> correct   
Help me and I appreciate that.
>>>  OR: I would appreciate your help.   

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