Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love my job, so I want to know more teenager and listen there stories.
Maybe I meet teenager live in other country, I hope communicate them.
Other reason I want to learn more knowledge about youth character in graduate school.
I want to be a teacher(good and can communicate using many languages).
강사 첨삭
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>>> I love my job, so I want to know more teenagers and listen to their stories.
Maybe I meet teenager live in other country, I hope communicate them.
>>> Maybe I could meet teenagers who live in other countries, I hope to communicate with them.
Other reason I want to learn more knowledge about youth character in graduate school.
>>> The other reason is I want to learn more knowledge about youth character in graduate school.
I want to be a teacher(good and can communicate using many languages).
>>> OR: I want to be a teacher who is good and can communicate using many languages.
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