Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do I want to learn English? Very often I ask myself about it. To travel abroad? to make a living? For self-satisfaction? to study abroad, etc. All of them are my purpose to learn English. That’s why I hope to speak English fluently. For traveling abroad, I can make friends with foreigners, I can go to the place where I would like to visit by myself. To make a living, having confidence in speaking English while working makes me feel like hitting home runs in baseball. I can make any deal internationally without fear. Sometimes in negotiation, if I can speak English fluently, I will succeed in getting good results. For self-satisfaction, I can feel proud of myself. For studying abroad, language cannot be an obstacle to study in any country. English fluency is essential in my life.
강사 첨삭
Why do I want to learn English? Very often I ask myself about it.
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To travel abroad? to make a living? For self-satisfaction? to study abroad, etc.
>>> To travel abroad? To make a living? For self-satisfaction? To study abroad, etc.
All of them are my purpose to learn English.
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That’s why I hope to speak English fluently.
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For traveling abroad, I can make friends with foreigners, I can go to the place where I would like to visit by myself.
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To make a living, having confidence in speaking English while working makes me feel like hitting home runs in baseball.
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I can make any deal internationally without fear.
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Sometimes in negotiation, if I can speak English fluently, I will succeed in getting good results.
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For self-satisfaction, I can feel proud of myself.
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For studying abroad, language cannot be an obstacle to study in any country.
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English fluency is essential in my life.
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