Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because I want to work for a trading company.
In a trading company, I have to speak, listen and write in English.
In privious company, I had a lot of difficultifes because of my poor English skill.
So, I want to do my work very well with fluency English skill.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer:)
Learning English as a foreign language will allow you to communicate with native speakers and ESL (English as a Second language). You will be able to gain a new perspective of the world, enhance your ability to communicate and understand yourself and others better.
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Because I want to work for a trading company.
>> It is because I want to work for a trading company.
>> CORRECT
In privious company, I had a lot of difficultifes because of my poor English skill.
>> In my previous company, I had a lot of difficulties because of my poor English skills.
So, I want to do my work very well with fluency English skill.
>> So, I want to do my work very well with fluent English skill.
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