Why is English fluency significant for you?
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Yes, it is because I would like to spread my career world widely, so I need English ability a lot to me. I have spent lots of money and time studying English, but I cannot feel big improvement up to now. However, if I compare when I started English to now my English ability, I improved a lot as much as I can write English essay now. Though I have improved, my capacity to use English in my career is needed more. That’s why I have to study English more, so I registered this course. At first, I didn’t care much about speaking ability because I think speaking isn’t the skill to be learned. Speaking ability is considered the easiest skill among four skills, but as time goes by, speaking is thought to be the most important skill to be learned. Fluency is judged by how well to speak the language properly in that situation. That’s why I started this speaking course. Of course, other than speaking, listening, writing, reading are important equally to be fluent in that language. That fluency mak
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Yes, it is because I would like to spread my career world widely, so I need English ability a lot to me.
>>> Yes, it is significant because I would like to expand my career globally, so I need a lot of ability is utilizing English.
I have spent lots of money and time studying English, but I cannot feel big improvement up to now.
>>> I have spent lots of money and time studying English, but I cannot feel a big improvement up to now.
However, if I compare when I started English to now my English ability, I improved a lot as much as I can write English essay now.
>>> However, if I compare my ability when I started learning English to now, I have improved a lot that I can write English essays now.
Though I have improved, my capacity to use English in my career is needed more.
>>> correct
That’s why I have to study English more, so I registered this course.
>>> That’s why I have to study English more, so I registered in this course.
At first, I didn’t care much about speaking ability because I think speaking isn’t the skill to be learned.
>>> At first, I didn’t care much about my speaking ability because I thought speaking isn’t a skill to be learned.
Speaking ability is considered the easiest skill among four skills, but as time goes by, speaking is thought to be the most important skill to be learned.
>>> correct
Fluency is judged by how well to speak the language properly in that situation.
>>> Fluency is judged by how well one speaks the language properly in any situation.
That’s why I started this speaking course.
>>> correct
Of course, other than speaking, listening, writing, reading are important equally to be fluent in that language.
>>> correct
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