Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> > Why is English fluency significant for you?
Because me and my family will go Singapore.
My father c[이름]ge his company so we must go there.
This is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.
강사 첨삭
T[이름]ks for this [이름]. When are you planning to move to Singapore?
Because me and my family will go Singapore.
>>> Because me and my family will go to Singapore.
My father c[이름]ge his company so we must go there.
>>> My father c[이름]ged his company so we must go there.
>>> OR: My father moved to another company so we must go there.
This is the reason why English fluency is significant for me.
>>> correct
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