Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Because it affects the promotion of the my company.
And most world people has speak english so i shoud speak too!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Joy!
Because it affects the promotion of the my company.
>>> OR: Because it affects my promotion in the company.
And most world people has speak english so i shoud speak too!
>>> And most people in the world speak English so I should speak it too!
>>> OR: In addition, most people in the world speak English so I should speak it too!
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