why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Speaking English fluently is important to me because I have two goals. Frist, I want to travel the world by myself and get new friends. Secondly, I would like to teach English for children.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss. [Name]!
Speaking English fluently is important to me because I have two goals.
>>> correct
Frist, I want to travel the world by myself and get new friends.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Frist, I want to travel the world by myself and make new friends.
Secondly, I would like to teach English for children.
>>> Secondly, I would like to teach English to children.
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