Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
You have to speak English fluently because you have to send and receive videos or e-mails with foreign workers.
And I want to meet and communicate with foreigners while traveling to other countries.
** please check it the bellow.
Meeting with new person
July 30 (Sunday),2023
Today, I went to church to worship.
Most of the churches I attend are foreigners, so I worship in English.
The reason why I went there is because I want to study the Bible and learn English.
I don\'t understand the Bible well in English.
But now that I am studying the English Bible, I believe I will be able to understand it well someday.
There were some new foreigners today.
They had people from Rwanda and foreign workers from the Philippines.
Among them, a Filipino named Sherwin and I decided to study the Bible with Sarah.
So we each introduced ourselves and talked.
I have to study the Bible with a new friend, so I will try to attend the weekly service.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss. [Name]. It\'s good to know that you incorporate English in some of the things you do regularly. I think constant exposure to the language will be helpful in being more familiar with the it. Good luck!
- T. Beth
Today, I went to church to worship.
>>> correct
Most of the churches I attend are foreigners, so I worship in English.
Most of the churches I attend are foreigners, so I worship in English.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Most of the churches I attend are global, so I worship in English.
The reason why I went there is because I want to study the Bible and learn English.
>>> correct
>>> OR: The reason I have been going there is because I want to study the Bible and learn English.
I don\'t understand the Bible well in English.
I don\'t understand the Bible well in English.
>>> correct
But now that I am studying the English Bible, I believe I will be able to understand it well someday.
>>> correct
There were some new foreigners today.
>>> correct
>>> OR: There were some new foreign attendees today.
They had people from Rwanda and foreign workers from the Philippines.
>>> correct
Among them, a Filipino named Sherwin and I decided to study the Bible with Sarah, so we each introduced ourselves and talked.
>>> correct
I have to study the Bible with a new friend, so I will try to attend the weekly service.
>>> correct
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