Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
English fluency is significant for me. I plan to work in abroad and communicate people in English. If I\'m good at English, I can express myself more delicately. I can share my feelings and situations as same as express within my mother language.
Also I have to talk with co-workers and customers, I should catch their needs.
When I\'m in emergency situation, I should inform them and handle the situation with using proper words.
강사 첨삭
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English fluency is significant for me.
>>> correct
I plan to work in abroad and communicate people in English.
>>> I plan to work abroad and communicate with people in English.
If I\'m good at English, I can express myself more delicately.
>>> correct
>>> OR: If I\'m good at speaking English, I can express myself more accurately/efficiently.
I can share my feelings and situations as same as express within my mother language.
>>> I can share my feelings and situations as same as how I express in my mother language/tongue.
Also, I have to talk with co-workers and customers, I should catch their needs.
Also, I have to talk with co-workers and customers, I should catch their needs.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Also, whenever I to talk with co-workers and customers, I should catch their needs.
When I\'m in emergency situation, I should inform them and handle the situation with using proper words.
>>> When I\'m in an emergency situation, I should inform them and handle the situation well using proper words/terms.
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