why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I`m going to be a professor in the US later.
Because I`m visiting a professor in Brown 2012 to 2013.
And every year I visited Brown for my ballet performance until the pandemic
And my children study in the US.
I will study hard every day with English.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]!
I`m going to be a professor in the US later. Because I`m visiting a professor in Brown 2012 to 2013.
>>> I`m going to be a professor in the US later because I have been visiting a professor in Brown from 2012 to 2013.
And every year I visited Brown for my ballet performance until the pandemic And my children study in the US.
>>> Moreover, every year I visited Brown for my ballet performances until the pandemic while my children study in the US.
I will study hard every day with English.
>>> correct
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