Why is English fluency significant for you?

2018-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

I have studied English since I was in a middle school. It has been for about more than 20 years. If I was educated in a right way, I could easily communicate with foreigner, but I couldn't speak well with English and I always feel embarrassed and then feel like running away from that situation. I have a dream that deliver my presentation to all professions who have a same job like me in English. This is the main reason that I keep studying English. As a Korean, I don't have many chances to use English at work and home.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to answer and send this. Being exposed to an environment where you get to practice and apply using English could really make a big difference in helping you to be fluent with it. In my case, I would say I got lucky to have the chance to use English all my life. I had chances to practice and apply the language. Always find time to expose yourself to using English. Good luck with your goal. Everything is possible!

-T. Beth

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I have studied English since I was in a middle school.

>>> I have studied English since I was in middle school.

>>> OR: I have studied English since I was a middle school student.  

It has been for about more than 20 years.

>>> CORRECT

If I was educated in a right way, I could easily communicate with foreigner, but I couldn\'t speak well with English and I always feel embarrassed and then feel like running away from that situation. 

>>> If I was educated in a right way, I could easily communicate with foreigners. However, I can\'t speak English well and I always feel embarrassed so I feel like running away from that situation. 

I have a dream that deliver my presentation to all professions who have a same job like me in English.

>>> My dream is to deliver my presentation in English to all professionals who are in the same career field as I am.

This is the main reason that I keep studying English.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: This pushes or motivates me to keep studying English.

As a Korean, I don\'t have many chances to use English at work and home.

>>> As a Korean, I don\'t have many chances to use English at work and at home.

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