Why is English fluency significant for you?
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. So your main purpose of studying English is because of career related reasons. Practice is very important in English fluency. Expose yourself to the language as much as you can. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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I have been planning of working in a foreign company all the time.
>>>> I have been planning to work in a foreign company ever since.
>>>> OR: I have always wanted to work in a foreign company.
I think if I work for a foreign company. I can broaden my thought and meet various world.
>>>> I think if I work for a foreign company, I can broaden my horizon and meet various people.
So, I need good English skills to work for a foreign company.
>>>> CORRECT.
As I said, the company I applied for is German company.
>>>> As I said, the company I applied for is a German company.
I have to communicate with the head office of Germany in English because I cannot speak German.
>>>> I have to communicate with the head office in Germany in English because I cannot speak German.
That is why fluent English is significant for you.
>>>> That is why being fluent in English is significant for me.
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