Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate! Thank you for sending this in. I appreciate the effort. I agree, it is not too late. Whatever you desire, no matter how difficult it is, if you work hard it is possible. Good luck! :D
- T. Beth
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In a few years I will travel to Europe with my daughter.
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>>> OR: In a few years, I will be traveling in Europe with my daughter.
At that time, I want to look nice in front of my daughter in fluent English.
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>>> OR: At that time, I want to be fluent in English to impress my daughter.
I think that if I can speak English fluently, I will be able to travel without difficulty in any country overseas.
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I believe it is not too late.
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