Why is English fluency significant for you?

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. English is indeed the international language. Therefore, if you want to fit it anywhere, English is necessary.

- T. Beth

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English is very important in the World.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: English is very important in all parts of the world.   
All most countries using the English, first and second language.
>>> Almost all countries use English as their first or second language.   
So, I thought, if I speak English, I can get a many chance.

>>> So I thought, if I can speak English well then I could get a lot of chances.   

when I speak English fluency, I can make other countries friends.
>>> When I speak English fluently, I can make friends from other countries.   

also, it can get a more opportunities.
>>>  Moreover, I could get more opportunities. 
So, I want to speak English fluency.
>>> So, I want to speak English fluently.    
Other things, I can go anywhere, if I can\'t speak English, it is very problems to travel.
>>> In addition, I can go anywhere. If I can\'t speak English at all, it is a big problem to travel.   
anyway, English speak is very important for me.
>>> Anyway, English speaking is very important to me.    
Thanks you.

>>>  Thank you.