Why is English fluency significant for you?

2019-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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There are many foreigners in my company. I have to communicate with my internal customers. This is the most important in software development. But some of them are foreigners. If I can\'t invite translator, I can\'t meet them. So I have to learn English. If I can talk to them, I can make a better product.

강사 첨삭

Hello Whopper! Thank you for this. I appreciate the effort. In that case, you really do need to communicate well in English because it is your job at stake. Everything is possible as long as you put effort in it. Good luck!

- T. Beth

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There are many foreigners in my company.

>>> CORRECT.    
I have to communicate with my internal customers.

>>> CORRECT.   

This is the most important in software development.

>>> OR: This is the most important factor in software development.   
But some of them are foreigners.

>>> CORRECT.   

If I can\'t invite translator, I can\'t meet them.

>>> If I can\'t invite a translator, I can\'t meet them.  

>>> OR: If I am not accompanied by a translator, I can\'t meet them.
So I have to learn English.

>>> CORRECT.   

If I can talk to them, I can make a better product.

>>> CORRECT.   

 

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