Why is English fluency significant for you?

2019-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think I should be good at English to be a global leader. I want to establish my own company. For working in my international company, I should communicate with foreigners in English. Also, now I passed American University to achieve my goal. I have to take lectures, having presentations, and doing everything in English. This is why English fluency is significant for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Chloe! Thank you for this. I hope you accomplish all your goals. Hard work and determination are the key.

- T. Beth
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I think I should be good at English to be a global leader.

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I want to establish my own company.

>>> correct
For working in my international company, I should communicate with foreigners in English.

>>> correct

>>> OR: To work in my international company, I should communicate with foreigners in English.
Also, now I passed American University to achieve my goal.

>>> Also, I recently passed in an American University to achieve my goal.

I have to take lectures, having presentations, and doing everything in English.

>>> correct
This is why English fluency is significant for me.

>>> correct

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