Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many people who want to fluently speak English as a second language. As for me, Korean, we really want to speak it.
There are couple of reasons why English fluency significant for me. First of all, it is related to my job. As I said being a good pastor is all about addressing to the audiences. Without fluently speaking English, they will not understand what I am trying to deliver the message. Secondly, i am going to live in Canada. The first language in Canada is English. As long as I live in Canada, it is mandatory to speak in English.
In conclusion, English fluency is significant for me for two reasons; the job reverent is all about preaching to audiences and living in Canada is mandatory to speak fluently in English.
강사 첨삭
Hello Moshe. Thank you for this. English is indeed the international language.
- T. Beth
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There are many people who want to fluently speak English as a second language. >>> correct
As for me, Korean, we really want to speak it.
>>> As for me, a Korean, we really want to speak it.
>>> As for me, a Korean, we really want to speak it.
There are couple of reasons why English fluency significant for me.
>>> There are couple of reasons why English fluency is significant for me.
First of all, it is related to my job.
>>> correct
As I said being a good pastor is all about addressing to the audiences.
>>> As I said, being a good pastor is all about addressing the audiences.
Without fluently speaking English, they will not understand what I am trying to deliver the message.
>>> Without fluently speaking English, they will not understand the message I am trying to deliver.
Secondly, i am going to live in Canada.
>>> Second, I am going to live in Canada.
The first language in Canada is English.
>>> correct
As long as I live in Canada, it is mandatory to speak in English.
>>> correct
In conclusion, English fluency is significant for me for two reasons; the job reverent is all about preaching to audiences and living in Canada is mandatory to speak fluently in English.
>>> correct
In conclusion, English fluency is significant for me for two reasons; the job reverent is all about preaching to audiences and living in Canada is mandatory to speak fluently in English.
>>> In conclusion, English fluency is significant for me for two reasons; the job as a reverent is all about preaching to audiences and living in Canada is mandatory to speak fluently in English.
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