Why is english fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think English is the most influencial language in the world. If we speak English fluently we can feel more comfortable in any places that we travel even though we don\'t know their mother tongue. Also we can watch the various medias like the youtube translated with English in the internet so it can help us to get much more useful or wider information easily. And nowadays my children become to get interested in English. They start to learn english in the Kingdergarten. I want to try to assist them with their learning. So I hope to improve my ability of English.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. English is indeed the international language.
- T. Beth
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I think English is the most influencial language in the world. >>>> I think English is the most influential language in the world.
If we speak English fluently we can feel more comfortable in any places that we travel even though we don\'t know their mother tongue.
>>>> correct
Also we can watch the various medias like the youtube translated with English in the internet so it can help us to get much more useful or wider information easily.
>>>> We can also watch various medias like Youtube with English subtitles in the internet so it can help us to get much more useful or wider information easily.
And nowadays my children become to get interested in English.
>>>> And nowadays my children got to be interested in English.
They start to learn english in the Kingdergarten.
>>>> They start to learn English in the kindergarten.
I want to try to assist them with their learning.
>>>> correct
So I hope to improve my ability of English.
>>>> So I hope to improve my ability in English.
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