Why is English fluency significant for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are three main reasons why I want to speak English well.
First reason is that it is essential to my job.
Next year, I am going to work at another department and the boss of that part is foreigner.
So, I should use English to talk with him.
That\'s why I want to learn how to speak English.
Second reason is to make a friend when I am trave[이름]g and to make the conversation with them easier.
Last reason means a lot to me.
I am not sure the exact time but I wish I accept the academical paper in famous international conference and present my work in front of a lot of people who are different nationality.
At that time, I want to present in English fluently.
강사 첨삭
Hello Rin. Thank you for this. Being fluent in English might be difficult but very possible. I wish you all the luck!
- T. Beth
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There are three main reasons why I want to speak English well.>>> correct
First reason is that it is essential to my job.
First reason is that it is essential to my job.
>>> correct
Next year, I am going to work at another department and the boss of that part is foreigner.
Next year, I am going to work at another department and the boss of that part is foreigner.
>>> Next year, I am going to work in another department and the boss there is a foreigner.
So, I should use English to talk with him.
>>> correct
That\'s why I want to learn how to speak English.
That\'s why I want to learn how to speak English.
>>> correct
Second reason is to make a friend when I am trave[이름]g and to make the conversation with them easier.
Second reason is to make a friend when I am trave[이름]g and to make the conversation with them easier.
>>> The second reason is to make friends when I am trave[이름]g and to make the conversation with them easier.
Last reason means a lot to me.
>>> correct
>>> The last reason means a lot to me.
I am not sure the exact time but I wish I accept the academical paper in famous international conference and present my work in front of a lot of people who are different nationality.
>>> I am not sure about the exact time but I wish I accept the academical paper in a famous international conference and present my work in front of a lot of people who have different nationalities.
At that time, I want to present in English fluently.
>>> At that time, I want to present it in English fluently.
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