Why is English fluency significant for you

2020-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I think englsih helpful me. langue learns most of people than a good job. And I\'m interested in america. I like a trip.so I want to go a lot of countries. my uncle will live in Philippines. I don\'t know they\'re specific schedule but at that time I want to go Philippines.

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Hello [이름],

Thank you for today’s homework!

Have a great day!

Teacher ELLY.

Why is English fluency significant for you?

I think englsih helpful me.

>>I think, English is very helpful to me.

langue learns most of people than a good job.

>>Most people are learning languages to get a good job.

And I\'m interested in america.

>>And I\'m interested in going to America.

I like a trip.so I want to go a lot of countries.

>>I like going on a trip, so I want to go to a lot of countries.

my uncle will live in Philippines.

>>My uncle is living in the Philippines.

I don\'t know they\'re specific schedule

>>I don\'t know their specific schedule.

but at that time I want to go Philippines.

>>But, at that time, I wanted to go to the Philippines.

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