Why is English fluency significant for you
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Why is English fluency significant for you?
I think englsih helpful me.
>>I think, English is very helpful to me.
langue learns most of people than a good job.
>>Most people are learning languages to get a good job.
And I\'m interested in america.
>>And I\'m interested in going to America.
I like a trip.so I want to go a lot of countries.
>>I like going on a trip, so I want to go to a lot of countries.
my uncle will live in Philippines.
>>My uncle is living in the Philippines.
I don\'t know they\'re specific schedule
>>I don\'t know their specific schedule.
but at that time I want to go Philippines.
>>But, at that time, I wanted to go to the Philippines.
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