< Why is English fluency significant for you?>

2020-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Recently, most people can travel to everywhere in the world they want to go. Many country accept English as common language. So we can communicate through speaking English. In my opinion, the ability to speak English well have many positive things. A fluent speaker of English can make many friends easily in many country and they can get a job in anywhere of the world.

강사 첨삭

Hello Amy. Thank you for this. Speaking English fluently can really help you widen your horizon.
- T. Beth
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Recently, most people can travel to everywhere in the world they want to go.
>>> Recently, most people can travel  everywhere they want to go in the world. 
Many country accept English as common language. 
>>> Many countries accept English as the common language.   
So we can communicate through speaking English.
>>>  correct
In my opinion, the ability to speak English well have many positive things.
>>>  In my opinion, the ability to speak English well has many benefits.
A fluent speaker of English can make many friends easily in many country and they can get a job in anywhere of the world.
>>>  A fluent speaker of English can make many friends easily in many countries and they can get a job anywhere in the world.

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